Please I need some feedback...(Video)

Tom_Journet374
Edited Date/Time 8/13/2013 7:54pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2zvwmJNw5Q&feature=youtu.be
I am currently attending high school and I want to pursue my dream of becoming a film maker. I shoot about everything but I've been doing motocross since the age of 6 and have loved it since, so I decided to start filming it. Could you guys please give me some feedback? I'm new to this. Thanks
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Grizz 8/12/2013 12:48pm
8/12/2013 12:48pm
Killed it! Song is a bit over-used I guess but it's a good song and you the edit went right with it, so I really can't complain about that. I really enjoy the racing footage mixed with the other stuff you do at Loretta's!
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Fleece192 8/12/2013 12:53pm
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Nice and the music wasn't bad either..
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Motoxdoc 8/12/2013 1:05pm
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Tom_Journet374 wrote:
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2zvwmJNw5Q&feature=youtu.be]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2zvwmJNw5Q&feature=youtu.be[/url] I am currently attending high school and I want to pursue my dream of becoming a film maker. I shoot about everything but I've been...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2zvwmJNw5Q&feature=youtu.be
I am currently attending high school and I want to pursue my dream of becoming a film maker. I shoot about everything but I've been doing motocross since the age of 6 and have loved it since, so I decided to start filming it. Could you guys please give me some feedback? I'm new to this. Thanks
My advice.....keep going to the races and keep doing THAT! Great job! I like when you pick a section and hold it there till the top 5-10 racers go through that same section; sort of a "style check" to see the different techniques of different riders through the same section.
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moto282 8/12/2013 1:11pm
8/12/2013 1:11pm
Nice job! I enjoyed it.

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DavidR 8/12/2013 1:15pm
8/12/2013 1:15pm
Two things:
1. The 46 second mark of your film might should have found the edit room floor.
2. You need to set up a PayPal account and ask Vital members for donations so that you can chase your dreams.

Good luck, hope this helps!
Tom_Journet374 8/12/2013 1:26pm
8/12/2013 1:26pm
DavidR wrote:
Two things: 1. The 46 second mark of your film might should have found the edit room floor. 2. You need to set up a PayPal...
Two things:
1. The 46 second mark of your film might should have found the edit room floor.
2. You need to set up a PayPal account and ask Vital members for donations so that you can chase your dreams.

Good luck, hope this helps!
What do you mean by the edit room floor? And do you also think people would really donate?
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35smom 8/12/2013 1:49pm
8/12/2013 1:49pm
Great video Tom!! Loved when you went from retro to now. Great concept. Hopefully Pettit doesn't think he's a movie star now...Laughing
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huck 8/12/2013 1:58pm
8/12/2013 1:58pm
Nice video. Seemed to be moving fast...need to slow the camera down a little, and even the transitions from frame to frame.
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jeffro503 8/12/2013 2:01pm
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I liked it Tom. I think you did a great job. Different ( in a good way ) as it's nice to see something new come along. I saw keep using your imagination and see what you come up with. I'd say to try different genres of music as well. Some times hard rock is what is called for....and other times it may be sound track or instrumental. Depends on what type of mood you are applying to the video i guess.
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plynn41 8/12/2013 2:43pm
8/12/2013 2:43pm
Very enjoyable young man! I especially liked the effect you used in 3:43-44.
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rallendude 8/12/2013 3:09pm
8/12/2013 3:09pm
Very well done...............
Tom_Journet374 8/12/2013 4:11pm
8/12/2013 4:11pm
Thank you so much for all the positive comments and I will take all this feedback to my best advantage! Thank you!
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231 8/12/2013 6:40pm
8/12/2013 6:40pm
Very cool video good job
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kzizok 8/12/2013 11:56pm
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Tom_Journet374 wrote:
[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2zvwmJNw5Q&feature=youtu.be]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2zvwmJNw5Q&feature=youtu.be[/url] I am currently attending high school and I want to pursue my dream of becoming a film maker. I shoot about everything but I've been...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2zvwmJNw5Q&feature=youtu.be
I am currently attending high school and I want to pursue my dream of becoming a film maker. I shoot about everything but I've been doing motocross since the age of 6 and have loved it since, so I decided to start filming it. Could you guys please give me some feedback? I'm new to this. Thanks
Make your videos available for mobile devices. I know a lot of people use this site from a mobile device.
tomcarroll31 8/13/2013 2:40am
8/13/2013 2:40am
Nice job ! Keep up the good work!
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frita 8/13/2013 5:06am
8/13/2013 5:06am
Really nice angles and editing. But yeah I wasn't a fan of the song. I think it's better using songs people have never heard before or are probably not sick of hearing lol..... Keep it going.
Tom_Journet374 8/13/2013 6:11am
8/13/2013 6:11am
Everyone thank you so much! I know the song was a bit over used and now i have a lot of new apps to find new music around the world. Concerning the mobile device issue, since the song is pretty popular youtube only made it available on the computer due to copyrights.

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Tom_Journet374 8/13/2013 8:57am
8/13/2013 8:57am
Does anyone know vurbmotos contact e-mail? I want to get some feedback from them.
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Chris849 8/13/2013 6:07pm
8/13/2013 6:07pm
Best LL13 ive seen so far. Great job and keep up the good work!!
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Randy_Nix 8/13/2013 7:54pm
8/13/2013 7:54pm
Great video! Put together very well and it flowed good with the music. Some of the clips looked a little shaky to me. Other than that, I enjoyed it!

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