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Edited Date/Time 11/6/2013 7:02pm
I know your not suppose to put videos on here and I tried putting it in the video screening room forum but no one is commenting, I really need some quick feedback on my video for school, its a huge part of my grade, and I know that this is the greatest moto community ever so I figured there is no better place to go, so here it is!

https://youtu.be/7zRlz1r2Wsg?feature=player_detailpage

Dont be too harsh its my first moto edit ever but let me know what you think needs to change, Thanks!
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coon44 11/6/2013 12:38pm
11/6/2013 12:38pm
Haha it had to be lit in a unique way, so I had to do it at night. Thanks for the feedback though bro!
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peelout 11/6/2013 12:48pm
11/6/2013 12:48pm
the only thing the dark reminds me of moto is taking a pro-ho into the starter-box at midnight and letting her try on some new knee-pads
motoxxx599 11/6/2013 12:57pm
11/6/2013 12:57pm
Looks like a normal practice/race night at Pax Trax in Bunnell, FL

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put_chug 11/6/2013 12:59pm
11/6/2013 12:59pm
It is dark
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seth505 11/6/2013 1:15pm
11/6/2013 1:15pm
Pretty neat man, hope you do well
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coon44 11/6/2013 1:19pm
11/6/2013 1:19pm
Thanks man! And Thank you everyone for letting me know what needs to be fixed! Oh and peelout your the freaking man bro! Haha
GeorgiePorgie 11/6/2013 1:24pm
11/6/2013 1:24pm
That is legit. I loved it. A+. The darkness was cool. Maybe a couple of sounds of the two stroke blasting the corner to get the attention of the viewer.

But to some jackass in college, they won't understand. Now if it was a baseball video, you're almost guaranteed an A.

I had a class in college I took and this asshole professor would just trash me for doing moto-related projects. He would give me C's just to pass, when everyone in the class would tell me they were best projects and most looked-forward to.....
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Grizz 11/6/2013 1:37pm
11/6/2013 1:37pm
Hey, wait, I know all those dudes. Who are you? lol
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coon44 11/6/2013 1:38pm
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Thanks bro! It means a lot, Glad you enjoyed it! And I know what you mean lol I go to an art school and no one even knows what a dirt bike sounds like haha
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coon44 11/6/2013 1:40pm
11/6/2013 1:40pm
And I'm Cody shuckhart lol you prolly know my brother he used to race district 5 all the time Grizz
GeorgiePorgie 11/6/2013 1:41pm
11/6/2013 1:41pm
He's from mckeesport. I've seen him too. I was born in uniontown, pa. Small world. Good luck.
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coon44 11/6/2013 1:55pm
11/6/2013 1:55pm
Haha that's awesome! And thanks bud!
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ocscottie 11/6/2013 2:11pm
11/6/2013 2:11pm
"I know your not suppose to put videos on here..."

Who ever told you that? we encourage people to post vids! even bettter if you add it in our video section Cool
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coon44 11/6/2013 2:22pm
11/6/2013 2:22pm
I did! Lol I just needed some feedback fast because my finals are coming up and no one was responding to me haha I was so nervous putting it in this forum! Glad I didnt get yelled at haha Thanks for letting me know for next time ocscottie!
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Boarddesign 11/6/2013 3:07pm
11/6/2013 3:07pm
I think to people who no nothing, this is a very bad thing. Sure, we know that's just a couple of BRO's out screwing around for the sake of the "edit"... but... to anyone who's never seen moto, they will be thinking "yep, that's exactly what I thought it is". BRO, there are chick's involved here... think about it. Some dude's in flannels and hoodies out riding dirtbikes in the dark... Make it a bit more exciting... people cheering in the grandstands, gates dropping with a pack of bikes roaring... shit chick's might actually WANT to go see... YOU are an AMBASSADOR BRO, represent!

I mean.. you did ask..
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TL_36 11/6/2013 3:37pm
11/6/2013 3:37pm
Looks good! I'm sure its hard to be too creative when you have to follow specific guidelines from an instructor. But that's what makes a better artist right!?
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Grizz 11/6/2013 4:09pm
11/6/2013 4:09pm
coon44 wrote:
And I'm Cody shuckhart lol you prolly know my brother he used to race district 5 all the time Grizz
Ahhh yes. Now he refuses to race or ride from what I've heard lol. Video was great!

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coon44 11/6/2013 4:10pm
11/6/2013 4:10pm
Thanks again guys, All the advice is really going to help me out in the future!
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Socket946 11/6/2013 5:22pm
11/6/2013 5:22pm
Sorry, I am not a fan. Needs more actual riding, during the day, than just stunts and talking.
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mx_563 11/6/2013 6:27pm
11/6/2013 6:27pm
a) Peelout, is my hero

b) I like your take on the night riding thing. I've seen night footage before with fire and all kinds of silly "pizazz". Your night riding footage was cool. You get an A for that.

c) I don't know how you could do it but you gotta give me a reason to care what three random dudes think about moto. Maybe have them give some unexpected or offbeat thoughts. "There's nothing like it and I grew up doing it " is not very insightful

my $0.02
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coon44 11/6/2013 7:02pm
11/6/2013 7:02pm
Gotcha mx593 you make a good point! Ill defidently work at more questions next time, Thanks!

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