T-Shirt Designs Your Feedback Please

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308 11/14/2011 6:08pm
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DIRTJET wrote:
Thanks for the feedback guys. Seriously tough crowd but I really appreciate the honesty. Looks like it's back to the drawing board. As for the bracelet...
Thanks for the feedback guys. Seriously tough crowd but I really appreciate the honesty. Looks like it's back to the drawing board. As for the bracelet... Unfortunately, it's a template mock tee. I'll have to chop that off.

And no it's not a Hydro74 rip. Joshua Smith does amazing work but these are my illustrations. Well, here's another one. Let the bashing commence.

https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/users/30252/photos/53717/s1600_Fly.jpg?132…
great illustration!
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ns503 11/14/2011 6:17pm
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So.....WTH is a Dirtjet?
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DIRTJET 11/14/2011 6:44pm
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Dirtjet is a mx graphics and apparel company. The jet part comes from our ink jet printer.
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chadwik74 11/14/2011 6:50pm
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I like the first one

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DIRTJET wrote:
Thanks for the feedback guys. Seriously tough crowd but I really appreciate the honesty. Looks like it's back to the drawing board. As for the bracelet...
Thanks for the feedback guys. Seriously tough crowd but I really appreciate the honesty. Looks like it's back to the drawing board. As for the bracelet... Unfortunately, it's a template mock tee. I'll have to chop that off.

And no it's not a Hydro74 rip. Joshua Smith does amazing work but these are my illustrations. Well, here's another one. Let the bashing commence.

https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/users/30252/photos/53717/s1600_Fly.jpg?132…
308 wrote:
great illustration!
Yeah that one is better than the first two.

Good job on taking the critiques as well, it can sometimes be tough to read, people start taking apart something you work hard on.....tough.
Shows your focus on the goal of good design rather than just getting caught up defending.
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DIRTJET 11/14/2011 7:27pm
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The critiques here are brutal to swallow. They're tough and mean just like the sport but honest people that speak their minds.
I'll take the punches and work harder on my designs and will continue to post them here.
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DIRTJET wrote:
The critiques here are brutal to swallow. They're tough and mean just like the sport but honest people that speak their minds. I'll take the punches...
The critiques here are brutal to swallow. They're tough and mean just like the sport but honest people that speak their minds.
I'll take the punches and work harder on my designs and will continue to post them here.
http://www.vitalmx.com/forums/Moto-Related,20/Heres-my-Crack-at-it,1228…

Check mine out, maybe will give you a few ideas
Bulldog Racing 11/14/2011 7:44pm
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The 3rd design is pretty cool!
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Camp332 11/14/2011 7:56pm
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ns503 wrote:
So.....WTH is a Dirtjet?
I launch dirtrockets out of my dirtjet bro
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pitbike502 11/14/2011 8:37pm
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Pumpkin37 wrote:
Seems like a rip from Hydro74's work: http://www.hydro74.com/
308 wrote:
Joshua Smith does some amazing shit!
That work is awesome! Never seen that before
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SEEMEFIRST 11/14/2011 8:56pm
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The font doesn't seem to be on an even arc in the first one. The bottom of the letters seem to be all over the place.
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Rooster 11/15/2011 6:06am
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Needs more wolves.
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GrapeApe 11/15/2011 7:13am
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Rooster wrote:
[img]http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/712sWdE2OTL._SL1309_.jpg[/img] Needs more wolves.


Needs more wolves.
That shirt is lacking a set of nun-chucks and a white dove skull, otherwise it would be my go-to shirt for date night.
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AbouttheRide 11/15/2011 8:11am
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Not bad, Im really surprised I havent seen one SPAM comment, I like the fact that I have yet to see one actually. Now I am asking myself do I post some About the Ride shirts? Smile
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DIRTJET 11/15/2011 8:27am
11/15/2011 8:27am Edited Date/Time 11/15/2011 8:35am
Now that's a sick t-shirt! I'll definitely have to do up a wolf illustration! BTW, I have been looking at VonZipper, One Industries, Fox, Shift and Famous and even with all the cool patterns they have I always tend to buy the ones with the skulls on them! I think every t-shirt and jersey I own has a skull on it... Anyway, how about this one?

About the Ride - Feel free to post your favorite t-shirt designs or even your own design on this thread. Cheers!
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HondaFan33 11/15/2011 8:28am
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I like the hounds tooth on the second shirt but that about it. Skulls are whack and whats up with the tiger and snake that are about to eat each other? And whats that yellow thing that looks like some sort of strange cowboy hat?
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308 11/15/2011 9:51am
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DIRTJET wrote:
Now that's a sick t-shirt! I'll definitely have to do up a wolf illustration! BTW, I have been looking at VonZipper, One Industries, Fox, Shift and...
Now that's a sick t-shirt! I'll definitely have to do up a wolf illustration! BTW, I have been looking at VonZipper, One Industries, Fox, Shift and Famous and even with all the cool patterns they have I always tend to buy the ones with the skulls on them! I think every t-shirt and jersey I own has a skull on it... Anyway, how about this one?

About the Ride - Feel free to post your favorite t-shirt designs or even your own design on this thread. Cheers!
ehh. I think the first two are better than that one. (Ha I pry sound like a dick, sorry man)
on your tiger/snake one, is there a name for that pattern in the background? Ive seen some like that before and I wanted to try and make one of my own. Did you buy the pattern or make it your self?
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DIRTJET 11/15/2011 10:29am
11/15/2011 10:29am Edited Date/Time 11/15/2011 10:32am
Nah, no worries man. In regards to the pattern, it's called a "Houndstooth" pattern. I redrew it using illustrator. If you want I can send you the ai. file of it. Took me a while to get it perfect. But here's the square that puts it all together. Hope this helps with your work! Cheers!

https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/users/30252/photos/53735/s1600_Houndstooth…

HondaFan33 - The strange yellow thing is the logo.

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308 11/15/2011 10:43am
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Thaks man! appreciate it. I always liked the M.C. Escher style patterns

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realMotocross 11/15/2011 11:18am
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the first one...hmm i think it lacks x-factor or appeal? don't know yet what to add on it..
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peelout 11/15/2011 11:25am
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not my cup of tea... but there are people out there for every design.

regarding the houndstooth pattern, i dig it. my snowboarding jacket is the repeating houndstooth in Gray, Light Gray, Blue, and White. sick jacket.
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moto589 11/15/2011 11:34am
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Rooster wrote:
[img]http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/712sWdE2OTL._SL1309_.jpg[/img] Needs more wolves.


Needs more wolves.
Can't have more wolves, it will look stupid when driving his truck.

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771 11/15/2011 12:45pm
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Skulls are so in right now. So in.
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peelout 11/15/2011 12:52pm
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771 wrote:
Skulls are so in right now. So in.
It's that damn Hansel! He's so hot right now!

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DIRTJET 11/15/2011 8:11pm
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Here's an older design I did a while back.
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DIRTJET 11/23/2011 9:05pm
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Ok. Here's another one. Let me have it! Shit or hit?
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jndmx 11/24/2011 3:07am
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Much better.
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flarider 11/24/2011 5:58am
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DIRTJET wrote:
Ok. Here's another one. Let me have it! Shit or hit?[img]https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/users/30252/photos/54088/s1600_Bitchin_Ride_Tee.jpg?1322110937[/img]
Ok. Here's another one. Let me have it! Shit or hit?
Honestly, looks like a shirt you'd find in Wal-Mart

and if the skull has no eyes, why does it need goggles?
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Klutch 11/24/2011 6:10am
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DIRTJET wrote:
Ok. Here's another one. Let me have it! Shit or hit?[img]https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/users/30252/photos/54088/s1600_Bitchin_Ride_Tee.jpg?1322110937[/img]
Ok. Here's another one. Let me have it! Shit or hit?
Your artwork is solid, but you have to modernize it a little.

think 80's neon colors are all the rage these days
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RaceFace 11/24/2011 6:31am
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From a design standpoint, I always stay away from anything resembling an upside-down triangle, unless that is the market you're aiming at. I also don't care for Dirt Jet, without the wheel this would not resemble a moto tee at all. Lastly, I am not a big fan of the term bitchin'. That seems like something that was popular in the late 70's early 80's surfer lingo.

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